Saturday, January 23, 2010

more 'ku train senryu ....


more 'ku train senryu ....


passage

moving past the lock
safe journeying destiny
a skeleton key


dark

dark hugging the light
reminding us there's two sides
two rights make a wrong

turn into the bright ~ nightlight
illuminating the hall


fast

a fast from loving
you who I loved so well
it's hell being apart


chill

days took on a pall
even the merciless heat
beating down doors

to get away from itself
heat so hot, it gives chills


slight

small in its shadow
far reaches of opacity
visioning light


sea oats

tender remembering
sea oats swaying the shore
prehistoric grass


well

well wishing isn't
a wishing well full of cents ~
cementing futures


sight

seeing isn't sight
a look behind obvious
around shadows edge


pale

moon's pale face staring
down from between ancient trees
at lovers entwined


© 2009 Odilia Galván Rodríguez

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