Saturday, January 23, 2010
more 'ku train senryu ....
more 'ku train senryu ....
passage
moving past the lock
safe journeying destiny
a skeleton key
dark
dark hugging the light
reminding us there's two sides
two rights make a wrong
turn into the bright ~ nightlight
illuminating the hall
fast
a fast from loving
you who I loved so well
it's hell being apart
chill
days took on a pall
even the merciless heat
beating down doors
to get away from itself
heat so hot, it gives chills
slight
small in its shadow
far reaches of opacity
visioning light
sea oats
tender remembering
sea oats swaying the shore
prehistoric grass
well
well wishing isn't
a wishing well full of cents ~
cementing futures
sight
seeing isn't sight
a look behind obvious
around shadows edge
pale
moon's pale face staring
down from between ancient trees
at lovers entwined
© 2009 Odilia Galván Rodríguez
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